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★ written in the car NEW / mushroom

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another myth....

the older guys used to say

black squirrels were good luck--

when was the last time

you saw a black squirrel?

No.2743 - 2010/03/11(Thu) 10:47:06

★ (No Subject) / Pegu

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Spring buttercups
pound out
of the mulch
like the impetuous sun
from behind a cloud

"Buttercups" are also known as Ranunculus: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ranunculus

No.2742 - 2010/03/09(Tue) 12:13:14

★ (No Subject) / bamboo

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Yukiさん
ほんのり酔っ払って、五行歌が作れるなんて、素敵ですね。
私は最近の自分（年とともにいささか頑固になってきている?）
に自戒をこめてこんなの書いてみました。

Yuki san
It is so nice of you to write a deep meaning gogyohka when you are in sweet drunken mood!
I feel if I'm becoming stubborn a little recently, so this
gogyohka is for my mind.

shift a little
the point of view
then
I can see something
before I can't

No.2740 - 2010/03/05(Fri) 21:16:05

☆ Re: / Pegu

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Hi bamboo,

I wrote this last week--

watch the rushing meltwater
too much for the storm drain
and remember
no human belief
can stay solid

Your gogyohka reminded me.

No.2741 - 2010/03/09(Tue) 12:12:03

★ how / yuki

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asking
to the treetop getting higher
to the root getting deeper
how the human mind
should be

酔っ払うと実にいろいろなことをグルグルと考えます。が、呂律は全然回りません。
ましてや英語・・・（大汗）

my English is in a mess than usual times because I get drunk tonight ☆彡

No.2736 - 2010/03/02(Tue) 21:30:23

☆ Re: how / Pegu

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hi yuki--

Good drunken song! Your English isn't so bad. The only thing I would suggest to change is removing "to" from lines 2 and 3. The rest is fine.

Is that a shooting star at the end of your message? I like it whatever it is.

No.2737 - 2010/03/03(Wed) 11:15:47

☆ Re: how / yuki

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hi, Pegu

thank you for advising me! I removed "to" along your suggestion.

asking
the treetop getting higher
the root getting deeper
how the human mind
should be

now, I think it might be better removing all "the", but I don't know how it is.

> Is that a shooting star at the end of your message? I like it whatever it is.
yes, ☆彡 is a shooting star, and my slight playfulness ;) I like it ,too!

No.2738 - 2010/03/03(Wed) 23:20:45

☆ Re: how / keiko

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Hi,yuki!

You are great! You have emitted light like a shooting star.
By my case, I was just laughing while in a wineglass and everything gone...even japanese.

年齢の所為でしょうか?最近は飲めなくなった？友は誰も信じてくれませんが（笑)

No.2739 - 2010/03/04(Thu) 11:28:13

★ (No Subject) / mushroom

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cats

sunbathing on the deck

snow melt

dripping

from the eaves

No.2734 - 2010/02/27(Sat) 12:11:38

☆ Re: / keiko

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Hi,mushroom!
Your poem full of calm.
Winter melted into Spring.
I'd like to be a cat and sunbathing on the deck.

No.2735 - 2010/03/01(Mon) 07:54:37

☆ Re: NEW / mushroom

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> Hi,mushroom!
> Your poem full of calm.
> Winter melted into Spring.
> I'd like to be a cat and sunbathing on the deck.

thanks, keiko....you're welcome any time you're in the area.
just bring your poems...

No.2744 - 2010/03/11(Thu) 12:16:46

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